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Aug. 23rd, 2016


momatu

goose bumps or goose pimples

You know the danger of being too helpful, right?  You keep getting asked for more help.

Would you say "goose bumps" or "goose pimples?"

Aug. 22nd, 2016


momatu

ize/ise

Hello All!

I'm beta reading my first Harry Potter fic, and I just have a quick spelling question--stylized or stylised?  I have my spellchecker set to British English, but it didn't catch this.  Is this an either/or, or would it definitely be spelled with the -ised ending in British English?  The spell checker also didn't catch realized and suggest realised instead, so same question there.  It did catch a few missed American spellings like -or- instead of -our- and one "L" vs. two, but not these two with the -ise as opposed to the -ize.  Before I suggest the author change them, I want to make sure the should be changed.  She did a really good job with British spellings most places, just a couple American spellings that slipped in.

Thank you to everyone who replied for all your help and suggestions.  I believe I've replied to everyone, but the way it displays comments and replies makes it hard for me to be sure I didn't accidentally miss a comment and not say thank you.

Aug. 17th, 2016

neck, main

naarna

Draco's language use in private

I'm currently having a beta read through my Draco-centric FF, and we repeatedly disagree on his use of language when at home/in private...

What I mean is, I know he had the upbringing of British upper-class and that it should be reflected in his use of language. I'm just not sure how formal he would speak in private, with people he considers - or comes to consider during the FF - as family.

One such disputed moment is:
"[...]We could do something else. You know chess?
Tom nodded eagerly, a big smile on his face. “Of course I do.[...]" (instead of "Do you know chess?")

or:
"You okay?" (instead of "Are you okay?")

Friend and I agree that he sees it a bit more relaxed when in private, hence dropping modal verbs and stuff, but would stick to the proper, more formal usage when out in the public to maintain the reputation.

That's where my beta disagrees, as she thinks that his upbringing as a member of the upper-class wouldn't allow for such a non-formal usage even in private. Now I'm curious what others think about that...

EDIT: Woah! I never thought that my question would bring such a response...

I should have added that English is not my native language, though it was one of my subjects at university, and we did touch the subject of sociolect -- that's why I probably struggle with that apparently not so simple point. ;-)

THANK YOU for answering! It did help me in the end... :-)

Aug. 14th, 2016

khalulu, kanji

khalulu

plurals of roof and hoof

Hello,

I was looking for rhymes for "hooves" and somewhere listed "rooves". (There were a lot of listings of words like "proves" as rhymes for "hooves", but for me the vowel in hooves is like the vowel in hook, not in who, so that doesn't work. I can pronounce roof with either vowel.)

I'm used to "roofs" as a plural of roof, but online I see that there are people who feel strongly that "rooves" is correct - but I don't know when or where they learned it. Alternatively, some people may use hoofs as the plural of hoof.

Any guesses as to how Harry or Draco, say, would make those (roof and hoof) plural, and whether those plurals could rhyme?

ETA: Thanks everyone! It seems like the vowel sounds are not an issue for most respondents, in which case I could use moves, proves, grooves. (Maybe as an American, non-horsey person, I just don't pronounce hoof like most British people would.)

I'm not trying to say any pronunciation is correct or not, just to find out who might use what. Descriptive not prescriptive. You say potayto, I say potahto. (If you have a few minutes, you might enjoy seeing Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers sing that and tap-dance on roller skates, or listening to Ella Fitzgerald and Louis Armstrong sing it.)

Jul. 31st, 2016

khalulu, kanji

khalulu

"whom" in conversation

How common/obligatory is the use of whom (rather than who, for an object pronoun) in conversational British English? It sounds kind of stilted in conversational American English unless we are using it after a preposition (but we usually just dangle the preposition at the end instead). So I don't have a good feel for its use in Britglish. The speaker is sort of a timeless AU version of adult Remus, speaking to Minerva, and he's saying something like "Who(m) did you bring with you?". Would it make a difference if it was Sirius or Hagrid speaking? Does it matter who(m) they are talking to?

ETA: Looks like I can leave it as "who" - thanks everyone!
Wikipedia is accurate (citation needed)

alchemia

Mastering [?] the Art of Potions: the Hard [?] Way

Sorry if this was asked; i took a look but wasn't sure what this might get tagged as :/

Would Potions be considered 'hard'? 'Tough'? 'Difficult'? Something else? Does it matter if it is Harry or Snape saying it?

And we know snape as potions master means he teaches it, but how would you say one has learned a lot about something but doesn't teach it... It may just be a hobby.. Has one 'mastered' the art of potions still? Or what is a better word?

Context is an ironic inversion of common 'teach yourself'[subject] or 'mastering [subject]', 'the easy/fast/simple/etc way (in just 3 weeks!)'.... So something like 'Mastering the Art of Potions: the Hard Way (a 5 decade commitment)' but if this wording is too americanised, how would both harry and snape suggest a title like this for a book? Suggestions for other ironic 'teach yourself' type titles also welcomed.

Jul. 15th, 2016

h/d black&grey pencil

twistedm

Already?

Once upon a time, someone (a Britpicker, perhaps?) told me that British people simply do not use the word "already." I took this as gospel and have attempted to banish the word from my fic ever since. But wow, sometimes it's really hard to go without. Do y'all really not use the word already, or can I relax a little here?

ETA: Thank you so much, y'all! Just to clarify, in this (and almost every) instance, I mean already in the "it was like that before, and it's still like that now" sense, of "Harry is already qualified to be an Auror, and the training can be skipped." I may have occasionally used it in the other sense, where it means "hurry up and do that" but I wasn't asking about that and I'm very glad to know that the word is indeed used in England the way I almost always use it here in the states. THANKS!!

Jul. 3rd, 2016

h/d black&grey pencil

twistedm

England/Britain/the UK?

Harry and Draco are talking, and Harry needs to refer to the nation they live in. Would he be most likely to say "Britain," "England," "the UK," or something else?


Draco gave him a look of curiosity, so Harry explained further. “I’ve had a law firm write them all, explaining that I am a private citizen and I have the right to sue them for libel in the Muggle courts. UK libel laws are damned impressive anyway. They’re even more impressive if you don’t understand them well, or have any idea of how to deal with Muggle courts.” Harry smirked.

“Granger,” Draco said, a look of understanding and amusement crossing his face.



Many thanks!
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Feb. 24th, 2016

tiger

timetiger

(no subject)

I know the term “supply teacher” is used in the UK for what in the US would be called a “substitute teacher.” In the story I’m writing, someone hires a barman to fill in for one who is taking an unscheduled day off. (If this scenario happens to be somewhat unlikely I’m not really concerned, though if it’s somehow startling or next to impossible, please let me know.)

Could the barman who’s hired in this situation be referred to as a “substitute barman” or should the working class Muggle Yorkshireman who’s talking about this use another term?

ETA: Thanks so much, everyone. You're all so wonderfully informative.

Feb. 7th, 2016

standard

smirkingcat

how long exactly may a class be going on?

hello there,
I was wondering about class- length and break - length and usage in Britain school systems (and if that would apply to hogwarts and in what way?)

here were I live depending on the grade and the type of school you are in, one class can last from 45 min up to 55 min (45 is usually for elementary school) and 50-55min are usual classes at middle to high school through there it might depend on what type of school) between each class there is a 5min break here (for some classes, who have to switch rooms the brake is just that: room-switching) though such classes are rare and most of our classes stay put and only the teachers go around (exceptions are chemistry, physics and biology in high school because we have some practical stuff in those classes)

we have double classes too- starting in elementary with PE and core- classes in the 2ed half of middle school education all the way through high school. in double classes most teachers skip breaks (through they are aware that they are doing it at their own risk because children's brains just shut down) but there should be breaks - so we are allowed to drink and if you can manage it without disturbing and drawing notice to it eat in class (you have to be sneaky through).

compared to this is the British system very different?

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